vox nihili

This is from the Terrible Writing Prompts Contest: 6. A man has a terrifying dream in which he is being sawed in half. He wakes to find himself in the ...

Part one: Hermanway House Chapter one Oh, yes, it was just my luck. I was broken down in the middle of freaking nowhere, the boondocks if you will. I pulled ...

You utilize the use of simple language to speak to the reader in a down-to-earth way. Good going! Reading this, it reminds me of how fortunate we truly are to ...

If I was your girlfriend, I'd be touched. It's great that you utilize the use of simple language, but in such a way that it conveys a strong message.

The young man leaned up from the dishwasher, saying “It’s almost done, just another few minutes.” “That’s great. I just despise washing dishes. I suppose that’s ironic, though, since my ...

"Shivering he rubbed his arms before pressing his hands to the side wound. The white snow was stained red with blood, shards of glass littered the field, behind him, barely ...

Try adding noses to your subjects. It will give their faces more life, if you care to do so. And please give some sort of indication that the picture is ...

"Slow, careful. Pale white once again; no colour, not now, even the cold metal has gone, left behind. Glass up ahead, sigh, metal again; framing the glass, clear colour streams ...

I appreciate your concern for detail-it's amazing how suspenseful the description you gave was. This is definitely a good beginning, but make sure you give a more distinct sense of ...

If you are writing a novel right now, let us know what it's about! It's really a great feeling to see that there's other teen-writers out there! I wrote/am revising ...